I’m still searching for the multi-coloured sneakers I had bought for Kat on her 14th birthday. “I’ll go for a run till the supermarket and see how they fare. I’ll be back in 20 minutes”, she had said, excitedly. This is how she trained for her fledgling track-and-field career.
It’s been four months since she went on her run, but even today, I can hear the sound of the blast in my ears, playing on a loop. Every single day, I drive to the end of the world, where they disposed off the debris from the blast, yet I am unable to find those multi-coloured sneakers.
Is it because Kat is still alive or has all colour in my life disappeared after lowering an empty casket in my daughter’s grave?
I can’t find the words to describe how incredibly powerful that was. Touching. Heartbreaking. Beautiful. Never stop writing!
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I never intend to stop writing, that I can assure you!
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I am really glad that you liked this one 🙂
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Suspenseful and heartbreaking. Great story.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Are you writing a novel currently? You can be a good novelist. If you haven’t started yet, give it a try.
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I’m absolutely serious when I tell you – this is, by far, the biggest compliment I could ever have received for my writing. Writing a novel is my ultimate goal and I’m eager to go ahead and get started; just need that final push.
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You will definitely do a great job. When you are done writing do send me a copy before publishing it, and I mean it. I’d love to be among the first few to read and review the work of upcoming talent. 🙂
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Wow! Surely the power packed words of a deep thinker who also keeps up the suspense till the last words! And yet leaves multiple meaningful messages for the reader through the multi-coloured sneakers!
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Thank you for commenting. I appreciate the kind words.
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Excellent Akash. Ur writing is very free flowing and easy on the reader. Look forward to seeing more! Keep it up!
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Great Akash. Very nicely penned down the feelings of the parents who have not been able to find their loved ones lost in the blasts.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked the post.
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