Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple‘s weekly prompt had me excited as soon as I came across it a couple of days. Unfortunately, I couldn’t send in my entry for the previous prompt, so I stepped up my game and decided to send one in for this week’s prompt as early as I could. I had a 100 words to tell a story inspired by the photograph you see below.
Hope you like it!
Photo Prompt – © C.E.Ayr
Looking For Fish
Word Count: 100
“Let’s go meet the fish, daddy”, she mumbled.
The structure she had been in, shed its skin and turned a bright blue; fallen bricks turned to dust, then water; lifeless bodies turned to whales, sharks, little fish she couldn’t name; people’s desperate screams formed the cage, as she continued her descent – more and more fish swimming around.
With tears rolling down her cheek and joining the water, she saw her father opening the cage door. She leapt, clinging onto his arm, just like she had on their previous fishing trips.
Together, they swam into the darkness of the ocean.
Btw, i also saw them as caged creatures coming free
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Awww, this made me smile. Yay to happy ever after 🙂
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Yes, don’t we all love a good, happy ending! Thank you for commenting.
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A dramatic story and engrossing read!
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it; hope you read the rest of the blog posts on the page and continue to come back when there are new ones.
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Great story, so imaginative. I also saw them as sea creatures who were trapped and now are free.
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Thank you for your comment and your thoughts! I appreciate it. So many people see the end as a release, and I am happy to hear about this interpretation – in some ways, it shows their positive outlook on things.
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Dear Akash V.
I, too, saw them as mer-people. Imaginative story.
Also, welcome to Friday Fictioneers where there’s always room for one more story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for the welcome and for stopping by, Rochelle. I am in love with the Friday Fictioneers community already!
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Wonderful! I see them as mermaid/merman. Loved how they swam into the darkness of the ocean. Great story!
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That’s a brilliant way to look at. It makes them swimming into the darkness less of a finale and more of a ‘To be continued’. Thank you for commenting!
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Very vividly described. It transported me there.
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Thank you for comment, Francesca. I know I’m doing something right if it transports you there!
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A very dramatic story, I love it. I am glad I followed my instinct and read the last FF post today!
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I am glad you followed your instinct too, and glad you loved the post! Thank you for the comment, Liz.
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